Friday, September 30, 2016

Bridal Bonanza


We would love to formally invite you to our lovely open house that will be held 
Saturday, October 1st from 1 to 5 pm! Raffles will be held throughout the Open House event, giving you chances to win prizes to make your day even more memorable. 
This gives all of you wonderful ladies and gents a time to meet vendors and get a real feel for how you would love for the flow of your wedding day of bliss to go! This will give you chances to win services and prizes of great value to make your date very memorable. A southern belle wedding dress trunk show viewing on models from 230 to 3.Short horse-drawn carriage rides and limo rides will be provided throughout the event to give you a feel for how you may want to arrive at your special day.  
This event is a must because to see what all of the vendors in the local area can do for you.
We cannot wait to see you and your special someone!             

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1 comment:

  1. • Try a stronger, more clever heading.
    • Never include a greeting like 'Welcome'
    • Open House is capitalized
    • Saturday, October 1, 2016 from 1:00 to 5:00 p.m.
    • Start a new paragraph - Raffles will be held throughout the Open House event, giving you chances to win prizes to make your day even more memorable.
    • "We will also have a southern" - Get rid of we will also have
    • 2:30 to 3:00 p.m.
    • Short horse-drawn carriage rides and limo rides will be provided throughout the event to give you a feel for how you may want to arrive at your special day.
    • Start a new paragraph - This event is a must because to see what all of the vendors in the local area can do for you.
    • We cannot wait to see you and your special someone.
    • Where is your picture and source darlin'?

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