We have some on site vendors that can show you samples of what they have currently in season and what they also can order you in from different parts of the country if you are looking for something in particular.
The season is changing and so are the flowers but that is okay. No matter what season or month it is we have multiple things to offer you from different arrangements in your bouquet, center pieces, all over floral decorations.
Free consultations and of course discounts when you go with multiple vendors in our building.
might want to check the grammar/wording (take out "is" in first sentance and put a comma before.) various grammatical/ wording / phrasing errors. strong headline, picture matches what i imagine the product would be. good key words, the phrasing is what distracts me the most. appealing for the intended audience, consistent voice throughout. more examples would be amazing, like types of flowers maybe even a price qoute. image is sourced.
ReplyDeleteGood start, I love the bouquet on your picture. Try to focus on just one of the services you offer, though.
ReplyDeleteGreat topic and strong start. A paragraph is three to five strong sentences. Maybe if you would have expanded and discussed the top five flowers and what they symbolize. Pick a topic and go deep with it.
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